Effective sentence is like athlete jumping over a hurdle

a: Effective sentence ~

b: athlete jumping over a hurdle

What: "An effective sentence is like an athlete jumping over a hurdle. As you watch him run toward the hurdle, you have no doubt about where he is going."

Useful?

Writer: Carl Perrin,

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Where:

http://www.oocities.org/grammardoc5/effective.html

Date: Oct 16 2013 10:06 AM

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